Um, er, um, wait! Um...
Oh.
Defence-less (the complexities)
Yes I’m guilty
No excuses
Only a basis for decisions
A process for the conclusion
If you wish to hear it.
No?
Any interest in comprehending
All the competing factors?
The tenuous positioning
Made transparent?
Not good enough?
I suppose not.
So what would you like me to say?
Sorry?
I'm stupid?
I'm stupid?
An asshole?
Aren't all these things par for the course?
I suppose I'll do what's expected
Retreat to my hovel
Retreat to my hovel
So you can fire
Agenda laden volleys
Agenda laden volleys
Leaving truth to wither
In the cross-fire.
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Very thought provoking poem - it's certainly worth stopping and thinking about how our reactions to others "mistakes" may actually stop us hearing the truth - perhaps at times it is too painful to hear the truth. Thanks for sharing as always
ReplyDeleteAs Ayela says, very thought provoking. Personally I would like to know the reason why. Judging without knowing the motivation is only gonna lead to more excuses. That's unless I am in a shitty mood then fuck off with the excuses.
ReplyDeleteHahaha totally with you Graham
ReplyDeleteHaha nice one Graham. I think a lot of people assume they know the reason why, therefore the judgement, without realising the complexities in every act, gesture etc. Ive been exploring this theme a lot lately.
ReplyDeletethanks for commenting guys - unless ive misunderstood yr motives. ;)
I gotta admit, I often just want the dude to admit "I'm an asshole."
ReplyDeleteI like your poem, Anthony.
Apologies are often inane, but asshole-ownership can help. =)
I like it when poems make me think. You've done that to me on many occasions Anthony. This is one of them. I also like the other comments.
ReplyDeleteThank you very much Pat.
DeleteI really love the line "defence-less (the complexities)"
ReplyDeleteAlso interested by how the image of the labyrinth influenced my reaction to this.
Thank you so much for your comment. I am very selective about images so I'm glad it resonated with you in some form.
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