The whole damn thing! With new suggestions. Thoughts?

 

Hi my friend,

Here's the whole thing. What do you think? 

 

A girl keeps a journal to battle her depression but instead, documents a murder.

This was my concept so I'm reasonably happy with it. But given that it's my best work, I want the best possible cover I can get.  I'm going to talk to another designer, if she's available, and see what she can come up with. Everything is still open.

Do you think the rear cover text is a little hard to read? 

Here are the titles I'm thinking of. 

I've highlighted the ones that seem to be popular, which I like too.

The Girl Who Changed Everything

The Girl who Feels Too Much

Beautiful Trouble

The Weight of Other People

The Things They Don't See

The Year We Fell Apart

The Girl Who Saw It Coming

Dear Laura

Jai's Journal

The Wrong Kind of Beautiful

The Last Year of Innocence

The Pages Between Us

What Happened to Laura?

The Beautiful Damage

The Gravity of Laura

I appreciate your opinion, even if you've given it before.

And I appreciate you, more than you know.

Peace

Anthony

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New Cover Reveal - But will it make the Final Cut?

 

T r u e    L o v e    K i l l s 

Will the cover or title make it to print?

I need your help!

All is revealed right HERE!

(Short video)

Your opinion counts, right now!

I'm debating whether to keep either.

The story itself is my best. It's ready to go!

It's not a true crime novel per se, that's why I'm thinking of changing it. 

The cover doesn't really depict the feel of the book. 

It's told in the first person in diary format by a emotional sixteen year old girl.

Laura

A girl keeps a journal to battle her depression 

but instead, documents a murder.

 

Sydney, 2008.

Jai lives alone with her mother and is prompted to begin a diary to deal with her gloomy, obsessive thoughts. Her world is shaken further when beautiful and headstrong Laura breaks into her circle of friends. Laura meets Xavier, a wild boy with dark hair and brooding complexion. The result is more explosive than anyone could have imagined.

 

Why do people have to hurt others? What makes people do the things they do? You may think you have your friends figured out, but do we ever really know anyone? Do we ever really know ourselves?

Love to hear your views on the type of title or cover it should be. 

Some title suggestions...

The Girl Who Changed Everything

The Girl Who Feels Too Much

The Wrong Kind of Beautiful (the new girl)

Beautiful Trouble

The Weight of Other People

The Things They Don’t See

The Year We Fell Apart

The Girl Who Saw It Coming

Thoughts?

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